This was well with the wait, Lucky's ego is now getting to him. Sometimes being cocky can make you the least likable person on the journey and seeing how he has probably the most dangerous job on the caravan. I seen cocky characters and jerk wards in anime, novels and in TV shows but Lucky is sure in the running for the most cocky fan fiction character if not pony. I've ever seen. I like that about him has a few wise guy elements and can come off as rude but deep down I thing he has a guilty heart. if not he would be trying so hard to get Hurdles to talk to him again.

The characters introduce are amazing. I can't wait to learn more about Lockie and Stock they are a living breathing mystery. I look forward to seeing the others also they have potitental to be memorable by this read to the grave